My Idols


MY IDOLS

                My idols are Avenged Sevenfold, Mr. Big and Steven Gerard. In my opinion they are really awesome. They have talent, amazing and very cool. Then, I’d like to describe to you about my idols.

                First is Avenged Sevenfold. Avenged Sevenfold is a group band. They played alternative rock music. My most attentions about A7x songs are Gunslinger, Dear God, Danger Line and my very favorite song is A Little piece of heaven. It is a great song, I really love it. Last year, A7X has lost their drummer. His name is Zacky. I felt so sad when I heard that news. Then, A7X made a song for reminding their drummer. The song is Buried Alive. I’m salute that they very loyal to their friend.

                Second is Mr. Big . Mr. Big is a group bad too. They played Pop – Rock music. They’ve Erick on vocal, Billy Shehan on bass, Paul Gilbert on Lead Guitar and Patt Tropey on Drum. I really Love Paul Gilbert and Billy Shehan. Two of them are really amazing. Paul Gilbert is one of ten best guitarist in the world. Same with Paul, Billy Shehan also one of the best bassist in the world.
                Third is Steven Gerrard. Gerrad is a soccer player. He Playing for Liverpool at Egland Premier League. Gerrard have a great pass. He also has a great long-range shot. It was very accurate.
The Last is Barcelona. Barcelona is a soccer club. The stdion from this club is Camp Nou. My favorite player in Barca are Lionel Messi, David Villa, and Carles Puyol. I Think that’s all that I could describe to you about my idlos. I hope you enjoyed it.


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4 komentar:

Sri Indah Rahmiati mengatakan...

in paragraph 2,3,4, you should add "the" in words "first,second,third"

weni ajjah mengatakan...

please, do not use contraction in your essay, yudhi..

Anonim mengatakan...

to describe to you about my idols = to describe you about my idols

hahaha.....

keep writing dude!

@restireiii mengatakan...

*like mr. saunir said, do not use contraction sign (')in writing ;)
*keep writing :D

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